I had a crazy long weekend. My sister
got married (super exciting) on Saturday, and I decided to take a 3-and-a-half-day
weekend to myself to help my sister prepare for the big day. She had me help
her with some of her DIY decorations which I’m not particularly great at. Nor do I actually enjoy DIY
crafts, mostly because I’m absolutely terrible at crafting. [Starting a
sentence with nor] *sigh* Anyway, after class on Thursday, I took off to
Spokane, where my sister lives, and spent some quality time with her, the rest
of my family, and the groom’s family. Because we live on separate sides of the state, I don’t
see them very often; it was nice to catch up and meet some other new family
members. [Starting a sentence with because] So Thursday night we all
join together for a barbeque and ate and laughed and talked about the wedding.
Friday arrived and the nerves
were starting to set in for everybody. But the show must go on! Friday was the
day of the rehearsal and the Bachelorette Party that I hosted. Everything
leading up to the rehearsal dinner and party consisted of getting the reception
space decorated and set up and making sure all the small details were being taken care of. I have to admit, I was a little cranky at the
rehearsal because it was held outside and it was cold, windy and wet.
[Using because at the end of a sentence] Don’t worry; I persevered knowing I would
be rewarded with a fancy dinner of Pizza Hut afterwards.
The Bachelorette Part was Friday
night after the rehearsal and dinner. With the help of the other bridesmaids, I
threw a pretty fun party. I’m
not sure if this is normal or not, but my grandma and her shenanigans were the
life of the party (for real!); she is so fun. [A compound sentence using
a semicolon] When the party died down and everyone was getting tired, we put in
a movie called Bride Wars, which we thought to be appropriate to end the night
that was before the wedding.
Saturday morning started bright
and early due to the time of our hair appointments. My sister, though she usually is an early-riser to
begin with, woke up at about 4am…5 hours before the hair appointment was
scheduled. [Using though to
interrupt a main sentence] I chose not to wake up that early, but was still up
before I would prefer to be nonetheless. All of the bridesmaids, including
myself, were super excited to get all dolled up for the big day; my sister
especially. With freshly styled hair and fantastic makeup, the 6 of us made our
way back to finally get dressed into our wedding-day attire. With dresses and
heels on, we packed up our umbrellas to get ready to face the rainy weather for
hundreds of pictures. I was cold, I was wet, but I was there to help my sister
stay warm and dry while we were taking pictures. As a sister, I was unhappy about the weather conditions
and wanted to run inside, take my uncomfortable heels off and curl up with a
blanket; as a maid of honor, I sucked it up. [A compound sentence using
a semicolon, the two sentences mirroring each other, with repeated parallel
structure]
After pictures, the ceremony
began. It was a really nice ceremony that was short and sweet. By this time I was
ready for a big dinner and to sit down for just a minute. The reception consisted of a delicious dinner
and some great dancing including square dancing (more or less), jumping up and
down, and line dancing; the “Cha-Cha Slide” and “Cotton-Eyed Joe” included.
[using a semicolon as a super comma.] It was a great day/night. But I’m happy
to be back in Pullman, in my apartment, wearing slippers instead of high-heels.
excellent effort, Jordan... (and a great wedding weekend! thank you for this fun read. Sure beats reading about Dora again ;-)
ReplyDeleteCorrect = Nor (but notice that you use a comma before that "because" clause at the end…)
Correct = starting sentence with "Because (nice semicolon, too)
Correct = ending with a "because" clause [Better way to punctuate that sentence—and also avoid that comma splice: "I have to admit: I was a little cranky….") [love that "Don't worry;" sentence]
Correct = semicolon connecting long and short sentence.
X = "though" here the same as "although"
Correct = semicolon connecting parallel sentences. Also great example of a long + short sentence connected with semicolon
X = supercomma